The Story: Don't eat the fruit in the garden, Eden,, It wasn't in God's natural plan., You were only a rib,, And look at what you did,, To Adam, the father of Man.
The Story: You smell like goat, I'll see you in hell
The Story: All the b***h had said, all been washed in black
Well, I never actually embarrassed myself over the lyric...but I really LIKE my version and I want to get it out there, for others to enjoy. It kind of lends a Bowie-esque / Metropolis (the movie) feel to the lyrics. You know, just imagine it as a science fiction tune, set a few years forward, in some dystopian future, when the latest breast implants (or who knows, penile..?) have gone all neon and LED-enhanced. And you can read about it in a magazine...(Oh, oh) Bennie and the Jets! (so now I've gone and embarrassed myself -- I hope you're happy! :-)
3/13/2008 6:11 am
Age it happened
Better than original?
Convinced others you were right?
Was partying involved?
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