The Story: Don't eat the fruit in the garden, Eden,, It wasn't in God's natural plan., You were only a rib,, And look at what you did,, To Adam, the father of Man.
The Story: You smell like goat, I'll see you in hell
There was a part of the song I couldn't hear
properly so I searched the lyrics and saw I was
wrong about this bit.
It might look like a very slight and easy-to-make
error at first glance, but what's happened is I've
changed a very poetic, pretty line in a something
which implies breathing sweat...which isn't so
pretty/poetic. :/
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Submitted on
3/12/2014 12:16 pm
Age it happened
not specified
Better than original?
No
Convinced others you were right?
Yes
Was partying involved?
No
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